What will come of you (edit 2)

What will come of you (edit 2)

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07-24-2013, 02:02 PM

yeah though i'm not to clever with enjambment

i think you could leave it a couple of days at least and then see what you see.

this way does lose the without which i thought was quite good.

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What will come of you (edit 2) - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-14-2013, 03:40 PM

RE: What lies beneath - by rowens - 07-15-2013, 01:30 AM

RE: What lies beneath - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-22-2013, 02:29 PM

RE: What lies beneath - by LaughGiraffe - 07-15-2013, 09:45 AM

RE: What lies beneath - by jdguyb - 07-16-2013, 12:34 AM

RE: What lies beneath - by Vistaldust - 07-16-2013, 04:14 AM

RE: What lies beneath - by billy - 07-22-2013, 03:34 PM

RE: What will come of you (edit 2) - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-24-2013, 01:31 PM

RE: What lies beneath - by milo - 07-23-2013, 04:10 AM

RE: What will come of you (edit 2) - by billy - 07-24-2013, 01:41 PM

RE: What will come of you (edit 2) - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-24-2013, 01:48 PM

RE: What will come of you (edit 2) - by milo - 07-24-2013, 01:58 PM

RE: What will come of you (edit 2) - by billy - 07-24-2013, 02:02 PM

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