07-23-2013, 10:09 PM
It reads like a journal entry. Try thinking stanza's not sentences. But I do like the little rhyme in the middle. IT flows nicely. That's the best part of this "poem". Its more like a paragraph
|
Untitled [First Post]
|
|
« Next Oldest | Next Newest »
|
| Messages In This Thread |
|
Untitled [First Post] - by Cosmolatry - 07-23-2013, 04:11 PM
RE: Untitled [First Post] - by billy - 07-23-2013, 05:52 PM
RE: Untitled [First Post] - by jdguyb - 07-23-2013, 10:09 PM
RE: Untitled [First Post] - by billy - 07-24-2013, 09:02 AM
|
Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)