07-23-2013, 05:52 PM
the block of writing takes the poetry away from it.
i'm guessing the formatting was lost in the copy and pasting.
as it is it's not so good, try and shorten the lines so we can have a proper look at it.
for now, it is cliche in more than few places,
i'm guessing the formatting was lost in the copy and pasting.
as it is it's not so good, try and shorten the lines so we can have a proper look at it.
for now, it is cliche in more than few places,