07-23-2013, 07:57 AM
It's a little hard to read. Maybe make some lines an entire sentence instead of moving from line to line mid sentence
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my try (first erotic poem! eeeee)
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my try (first erotic poem! eeeee) - by Bunx - 07-17-2013, 04:36 AM
RE: my try (first erotic poem! eeeee) - by rowens - 07-17-2013, 06:57 AM
RE: my try (first erotic poem! eeeee) - by Brownlie - 07-17-2013, 07:35 AM
RE: my try (first erotic poem! eeeee) - by Bunx - 07-17-2013, 08:41 AM
RE: my try (first erotic poem! eeeee) - by billy - 07-17-2013, 10:26 AM
RE: my try (first erotic poem! eeeee) - by Bunx - 07-22-2013, 01:33 AM
RE: my try (first erotic poem! eeeee) - by jdguyb - 07-23-2013, 07:57 AM
RE: my try (first erotic poem! eeeee) - by Bunx - 07-27-2013, 01:25 AM
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