Love the honest feedback

[Todd]

Apart of. Apart from.
Like snowflakes - appearing the same, but none identical. Together, transforms wonder; alone, melts then evaporates.
STAB to the self we all possess, we, in it's entirety, cannot control.
Act as the witness and unveil truth. Act without self, and unveil peace.
self is trickery that fuels fools.

This sort of loses me right in the beginning. It feels like you're misusing apart of (sp). It should be "a part of". Once we get into the piece, it doesn't feel that there's a lot being said. It feels mostly circular with the appearance of wisdom.

It didn't work for me. Sorry I couldn't be more positive.

Best,

Todd