Edited: Spiritual Warfare: The Battle Within

[conroy_01]

Just sharing

In that spirit, I have to say that this really reminded me of a much shorter poem I once wrote. Parts of your poem even seem to be seeking to express some of the same things I expressed in my poem. I submitted it a while ago for critique on this site, so I'll just post a link to the thread and you can read it there:
If
("If" is the name of the poem)

It is very similar. Both seem to be quite personal. Mine are just long because there are several and i wrote each over a couple of months. I do like how your's is written. Very nice.