Edited: Spiritual Warfare: The Battle Within
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(06-28-2013, 06:17 AM)Bunx Wrote:  spiritual warfare?
hmm
Past attacks me
Darkness consumes me
Guilt and depression overwhelm me
Devil attacks me
Beats me down
Death is nearby
Waiting, inviting, welcoming
Using all my strength to keep them at bay
Fading away is my spirit
Weakness overcoming me
Hope is disappearing
Light is shrinking, slipping away
God is hiding
Gone from my sight
Maybe just blind
Soul is empty
Mind is tangled
Spinning, running, never ceasing
Waiting for the crash
Fearful, anxious, dreadful
"Save Me From Myself"

"fearful, anxious, dreadful"
i would say to use more commas in the sentence. like "waiting, for the crash."
instead of
"WAITING FOR THE CRASH"
does crash mean rehabilitation? or texting and driving?
Crash means being so overwhelmed and worn down to the point my body and mind just crash.
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Edited: Spiritual Warfare: The Battle Within - by conroy_01 - 06-25-2013, 02:26 AM
RE: save me from myself - by conroy_01 - 06-25-2013, 06:03 AM
RE: save me from myself - by rowens - 06-26-2013, 01:50 AM
RE: save me from myself - by conroy_01 - 06-26-2013, 02:57 AM
RE: save me from myself - by Brownlie - 06-26-2013, 03:21 AM
RE: save me from myself - by rowens - 06-26-2013, 04:13 AM
RE: save me from myself - by conroy_01 - 06-26-2013, 06:21 AM
RE: save me from myself - by Bunx - 06-28-2013, 06:17 AM
RE: save me from myself - by conroy_01 - 07-22-2013, 12:59 PM
RE: save me from myself - by milo - 07-22-2013, 01:04 PM
RE: Edited: Spiritual Warfare: The Battle Within - by conroy_01 - 07-22-2013, 02:16 PM
RE: Edited: Spiritual Warfare: The Battle Within - by conroy_01 - 07-23-2013, 05:04 AM



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