Love the honest feedback

Love the honest feedback

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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07-22-2013, 11:49 AM

hi elyse

i'm guessing you pasted it from somewhere else and it messed up the formatting
i would just reinforce what LB said
if you can sort the line lengths out you'll get more feedback

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Love the honest feedback - by ElyseKelly - 07-22-2013, 09:01 AM

RE: Love the honest feedback - by Volaticus - 07-22-2013, 10:38 AM

RE: Love the honest feedback - by billy - 07-22-2013, 11:49 AM

RE: Love the honest feedback - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-22-2013, 02:45 PM

RE: Love the honest feedback - by TheWall0912 - 07-22-2013, 09:17 PM

RE: Love the honest feedback - by jdguyb - 07-23-2013, 05:34 AM

RE: Love the honest feedback - by Todd - 07-23-2013, 06:51 AM

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