in a cloak of fallen leaves

[cidermaid]

Just staring out on the road to learning haiku & senyru
Heart particularly enjoyed your senryu train starter.
Ray your offering is one that can be read over with pleasure many times.

Not sure what the rules of a senyru train are (could you explain if there are any, sounds interesting)

meanwhile an attempted offering from me:

Passing equinox
A ripening barley crop
A new hair cut