07-19-2013, 07:22 AM
Not gonna question why a mother would even consider taking a newborn up that high, but what a good dark poem. I especially love the ending where it contrast the rhythm of the poem. And also a nice pairing of the "blanket" and sleep, which of course has a darker meaning. As I would prefer like rowens is every letter capitalized in the begging of each line, but I'm sure you're piecing together certain lines in this way.