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The Soft Cocoon
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07-18-2013, 07:53 PM
Thank you all for the critique. This is about a person sitting on the beach a d not noticing what's going on around him because his face is in a book. He doesn't notice anything until the breeze disturbs his reading. Then he goes indoors to continue to read about a person who loves the beach that he, himself, never took notice of. Irony.
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The Soft Cocoon - by Vistaldust - 07-17-2013, 01:35 PM
RE: The Soft Cocoon - by Fred-Flossy - 07-17-2013, 10:32 PM
RE: The Soft Cocoon - by Brownlie - 07-17-2013, 10:40 PM
RE: The Soft Cocoon - by Bunx - 07-18-2013, 08:32 AM
RE: The Soft Cocoon - by cidermaid - 07-18-2013, 03:03 PM
RE: The Soft Cocoon - by billy - 07-18-2013, 03:23 PM
RE: The Soft Cocoon - by Vistaldust - 07-18-2013, 10:11 PM
RE: The Soft Cocoon - by Vistaldust - 07-18-2013, 07:53 PM
RE: The Soft Cocoon - by Brownlie - 07-18-2013, 09:25 PM
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