Short Lived Freedom
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I love the format you set up for this poem. It sets a good intense feeling after every number count, and every line ran smoothly. Keep up the good work!


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Short Lived Freedom - by TheWall0912 - 07-17-2013, 10:02 PM
RE: Short Lived Freedom - by ireland4scots - 07-18-2013, 09:37 AM
RE: Short Lived Freedom - by billy - 07-18-2013, 09:56 AM
RE: Short Lived Freedom - by TheWall0912 - 07-18-2013, 11:39 PM
RE: Short Lived Freedom - by LaughGiraffe - 07-19-2013, 12:50 AM
RE: Short Lived Freedom - by docaka - 07-19-2013, 06:08 AM



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