The Soft Cocoon

[Brownlie]

The Soft Cocoon- The setting is the soft cocoon?

An ocean crawling to shore,
waves whispering, sibilance -- I'm just playing around.
I would get rid of are you here?
A seagull descends,
cooing softly.

The sun walks the sky,

a page flutters frantically
in the breeze.

I continue to read
about a man
who loved summer.

I'm just sort of playing around with your words here, there is the proverb "Show and not tell" which is not a bad proverb.