quite nice if you want a pretty text and that is one definition of poetry according to me.
But I think there should be a message in a poem as well.
This poem might have a meaning that I cant see and in that case I'm sorry four missing it.
The poem has so meany conflicts about this queen. She watches over the righter she is the righter's guide in a spiritual and or physical way she is his lover and his friend.
The conflict in the end were you wright "Best friends, King and Queen" might occur from my one id'e of the meaning of the expression best friend. Fore me the expression best friend don't imply lovers but to persons that have a close relationship without being romantically involved. And the line above "She is mine and I am hers" implies the opposite.
Its nicely formulated but lacks in meaning.
Sam
But I think there should be a message in a poem as well.
This poem might have a meaning that I cant see and in that case I'm sorry four missing it.
The poem has so meany conflicts about this queen. She watches over the righter she is the righter's guide in a spiritual and or physical way she is his lover and his friend.
The conflict in the end were you wright "Best friends, King and Queen" might occur from my one id'e of the meaning of the expression best friend. Fore me the expression best friend don't imply lovers but to persons that have a close relationship without being romantically involved. And the line above "She is mine and I am hers" implies the opposite.
Its nicely formulated but lacks in meaning.
Sam