07-15-2013, 01:30 AM
Starring deeply into a mirror
Staring
watching the face as it glows,
the pupils pop behind the skin
The skin of your eyes?
and dance within the reflective
vessel.
If you stare long enough without
closing your eyes to blink
Could be a comma, but doesn't have to be
you will notice that the face begins
to blur, the cheeks darken.
Eyes that have grown weary,
That comma doesn't have to be here
turn red in agony and just above
the scalp there it is,
Could be a comma after scalp, but it doesn't have to be
The shadow of your reflection
You want the "The" to be capital?
staring right back at you
Staring
watching the face as it glows,
the pupils pop behind the skin
The skin of your eyes?
and dance within the reflective
vessel.
If you stare long enough without
closing your eyes to blink
Could be a comma, but doesn't have to be
you will notice that the face begins
to blur, the cheeks darken.
Eyes that have grown weary,
That comma doesn't have to be here
turn red in agony and just above
the scalp there it is,
Could be a comma after scalp, but it doesn't have to be
The shadow of your reflection
You want the "The" to be capital?
staring right back at you