For I am alive (please read and criticise)

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For I am alive (please read and criticise)

abc_dragon_000
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07-14-2013, 01:29 PM

hmmm true.... alright Sad

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I wasn't venting about my life haha just trying to write about an issue (of cruel misdeeds) in the poem through the changing colours of an object...

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For I am alive (please read and criticise) - by abc_dragon_000 - 07-11-2013, 09:08 PM

RE: For I am alive (please read and criticise) - by cidermaid - 07-11-2013, 10:51 PM

RE: For I am alive (please read and criticise) - by AdamPaulBentley - 07-13-2013, 10:18 AM

RE: For I am alive (please read and criticise) - by abc_dragon_000 - 07-13-2013, 10:44 PM

RE: For I am alive (please read and criticise) - by Leanne - 07-14-2013, 04:56 AM

RE: For I am alive (please read and criticise) - by Brownlie - 07-14-2013, 05:22 AM

RE: For I am alive (please read and criticise) - by abc_dragon_000 - 07-14-2013, 01:29 PM

RE: For I am alive (please read and criticise) - by abc_dragon_000 - 07-16-2013, 11:13 PM

RE: For I am alive (please read and criticise) - by Brownlie - 07-14-2013, 01:42 AM

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