For I am alive (please read and criticise)

For I am alive (please read and criticise)

AdamPaulBentley
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07-13-2013, 10:18 AM

Hi there

First of all, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece so thank you for posting it!
Secondly, I would like to commend you on the excellent use of a varied vocabulary!

All in all, a very fine poem!

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For I am alive (please read and criticise) - by abc_dragon_000 - 07-11-2013, 09:08 PM

RE: For I am alive (please read and criticise) - by cidermaid - 07-11-2013, 10:51 PM

RE: For I am alive (please read and criticise) - by AdamPaulBentley - 07-13-2013, 10:18 AM

RE: For I am alive (please read and criticise) - by abc_dragon_000 - 07-13-2013, 10:44 PM

RE: For I am alive (please read and criticise) - by Leanne - 07-14-2013, 04:56 AM

RE: For I am alive (please read and criticise) - by Brownlie - 07-14-2013, 05:22 AM

RE: For I am alive (please read and criticise) - by abc_dragon_000 - 07-14-2013, 01:29 PM

RE: For I am alive (please read and criticise) - by abc_dragon_000 - 07-16-2013, 11:13 PM

RE: For I am alive (please read and criticise) - by Brownlie - 07-14-2013, 01:42 AM

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