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(07-11-2013, 04:18 PM)cidermaid Wrote:  I think you are missing a p !
(5th line from bottom to make the up).

I did like the anti meter reaction. (I frequently feel a similar response when being told how easy meter is).

Thanks for the read AJ.

It's not missing a "p"; it has one "it" too many.
(The one in line 6 from bottom.)
It was probably left in by mistake from a previous version.

The poem, by the way does have meter (2nd word in 3rd line).

It's impossible to write a poem without meter.
If you write a poem that has words, it has meter;
if you write one without words, you haven't written.
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Metered Out - by Vistaldust - 07-11-2013, 12:37 PM
RE: Metered Out - by cidermaid - 07-11-2013, 04:18 PM
RE: Metered Out - by rayheinrich - 07-12-2013, 07:24 PM



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