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[Brownlie]

Hi Brownlie, appreciate the thought and the links. Will go and have a look later.
I will always acknowledge my need to spend more time in the prctice sections - which i love.
But on this occassion was actually just messing around with no real interest or intent to be correct or even vuagly clever, let alone fit into a set form. So in terms of poetry it probably does suck...but i was just in a silly mood today.
AJ

Appoligies to Ray this is straying too far off your post.
Your poem was fun and set me going though.

Oh, I didn't mean to ruin your fun. I'm sorry. I don't think your poetry sucks.