07-11-2013, 01:55 AM
(07-04-2013, 01:01 AM)Bunx Wrote: EDIT 1
Who has got the crabs? love this beginning
the rock crabs? stone slabs
slowing rising from the withering earth
below our soft walking carpet.
Sweet grass, the finest of smells
going up my nose to cleanse my
sense of right and rock, yea.
The rock attack crabs.
Crabs, ah everything covering this. these first two lines seem to lack rhythm
so love filled alley. Cats prowl and so do dogs.
Brother move to and flow to the sounds
of the bass below. I wish I could not
be so scared to fill that pinch. nice, fun description of wanting to get cosy with a crab.
Do crabs of rock love? You
do not know. But even crabs
have makes, you know? So
I bake this crab and eat it once and for all.
Yaw yaw, singing to and fro
about things i have heard of,
things i do not know. Monsters
of the rocks beneath our feet.
just like a rocky character,
you do not want to meet!
So take a seat, and greet
me. Buy me a drink if you will
wait, there it is,
the rock crabs!
this is how you write songs in "the" music "scene" your welcome for the teenagers.....sorry if you infact are a teenager
i run into the scenester problem alot. young girls who simply like music, and want to know more about the scene. what i tell them is my scene is your scene. when you are in a community you are apart of as scene. aka the church scene, the fishing scene ect. it is not about music so much as groups of people
