07-10-2013, 09:34 PM
Hey,
I'm not sure what you mean by lack is the replacer. Is it the lack of smell replaces the shit? Without understanding that ÇI sort of loose out on the rest of the poem.
I'm not sure what you mean by lack is the replacer. Is it the lack of smell replaces the shit? Without understanding that ÇI sort of loose out on the rest of the poem.
(07-01-2013, 07:16 PM)alexaomame Wrote: First poem I am submitting on this site, or any site, really.
The Replacer
Your dogs were here for five minutes
They took a thousand shits
The gravel, the grass, the cement
The malodorousness lessens everyday
The lack is the replacer