07-10-2013, 09:14 PM
Hey,
Yeah I wasn't sure what you meant about the "makes" either, but i really like this theme, reminds be of the song Rock Lobster.
Maybe try re-working the first few verses as the the 2nd 2 really work and are fun, a bit more clear. You could probably make the images into something a bit more tangible.
Good luck!!
Yeah I wasn't sure what you meant about the "makes" either, but i really like this theme, reminds be of the song Rock Lobster.
Maybe try re-working the first few verses as the the 2nd 2 really work and are fun, a bit more clear. You could probably make the images into something a bit more tangible.
Good luck!!