07-10-2013, 04:20 AM
(07-08-2013, 07:01 AM)hardon Wrote:I liked it. Give me the feeling of being in a pub and wanting another drink to change the current vibe.
it's good to be knee-deep
in concentration's wreckage
fishing in our bobbleheads
fluttering like captive birds
empty nights and bottles turn
cold shoulders into cushions
thru a muddy ocean haze
"through" is needed. "thru" just seems awkward.
in so many fucked up ways
there's something plastic surgery
about the way she leans on me
deer eyes and a wedding ring
reflection's such a dirty thing
I hear it crack under my feet
and I'm stuck to the ice
forget the numbers on the tab
give me another feeling, Sam
I once told this blond chick to screw in a light bulb..
She got naked and asked "how do I get in it?"
She got naked and asked "how do I get in it?"