07-08-2013, 04:32 PM
Thanks guys.
I'm a novice too Vistal. Sounds like you got it and that's a relief, means it's not a incoherent mess lol. Glad you liked it
billy, you pointed out the one metaphor that I was unsure of, ironically it was the first line that I wrote and built the rest around it yet somehow it didn't quite fit in the finished puzzle. I must admit that I don't really know what "meter" means. Is it how the words add up to make it feel like there's a rhythm? Thanks for criting, sounds like you know these things so I am noting all this
I'm a novice too Vistal. Sounds like you got it and that's a relief, means it's not a incoherent mess lol. Glad you liked it
billy, you pointed out the one metaphor that I was unsure of, ironically it was the first line that I wrote and built the rest around it yet somehow it didn't quite fit in the finished puzzle. I must admit that I don't really know what "meter" means. Is it how the words add up to make it feel like there's a rhythm? Thanks for criting, sounds like you know these things so I am noting all this
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