07-08-2013, 09:26 AM
Hi Vd, I can relate to a lot of this, that feeling not being ready for the shade of the old oak tree and you convey the muted anger very well. The first stanza is solid with strong images and lines fav: tails no longer wag me stiff. The second stanza confused me, who are they ? sorry but I couldn't get this. S3 brings back the lonely images and the explanation for the catatonic state but I'm left unclear if this is a latte refill a refill of the shark. I enjoyed the images in S1 and S3 and wish I could have got more from S2 hope this helps. TOMH
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