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commitment haiku

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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07-08-2013, 09:15 AM

(07-08-2013, 03:43 AM)jjhunter Wrote: the art of haiku
juxtaposing thought goes here
is quickly mastered

i've never heard of commitment haiku. it reads as a non haiku maybe a senryu.
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commitment haiku - by jjhunter - 07-08-2013, 03:43 AM

RE: commitment haiku - by billy - 07-08-2013, 09:15 AM

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