07-08-2013, 07:58 AM
Hardon...(name,lol....sorry). You have a lot of great imagery here. I have read this a number of times, and I really like it! Having said that, I'm not sure if I'm understanding what I like. That could be a good thing, as I am still a novice fisherman trying to catch more meaning from poetry than the usual fragments I normally do. I REALLY get that last stanza about being stuck in a situation that we just can't maneuver out of, so the best we can do is find some quick band ade to at least maneuver out of the pain. I think I'm getting the third stanza , relating to being deceived by the "fairer" sex. Someone may chime in on meter. Nice effort. Definitely some great irony, which I love to put in my own poetry.