Last words

[addy]

Ah, I see! Sorry, ignore my comment on your other poem about the title, then

I quite liked this one. The first stanza, especially, really caught me. Wonderful image.

Thanks for everything
we had but it's time
to lit "light" the memories with
fire and watch
it"them" since it's many memories fade away

see it didn't have to
be this way but
sometimes pride
gets the best of us
and destroys good
things

is there a reason you broke the thought here..."

that were once unbreakable
or at least I thought and not here?
and even though some nights
the situation attacks my mind Personally I'd pick other synonyms for "situation" and "attacks", but then again the word choice might just be a taste thing
I haven't let it hurt me physically [i][b]It would be better to end this with a more potent line, maybe an image? "I let the pain burn to leave only calm ash"... something like that, but write it better

Good job