Alone I Charge into the Evening Breeze

[Vistaldust]

First, you might want to consider going here:

http://pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=10115

The reason I suggest this is, in the critical forum, I would rather address the content but you don't have the form correct, in the practice forum, I would rather address the form. After you get the form right in the practice forums it is perfectly acceptable to repost in the critical forums for critique of content.

I hope I am being clear and helpful here.

Okay, thanks. I'll post this in the practice forum.

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milo, I don't see a practice forum, unless you are referring to miscellaneous or poetry or fun?

did you click the link I left?

http://pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=10115

Yes, I'm reading the poem you wrote and how it fits the description you laid out.