07-06-2013, 02:56 PM
AJ, thank you for your critique. When I am writing, I don't realize that some words are superfluous. I am still learning the basic of poetry and your examples of condensing and cutting away words not needed has been a good learning lesson for me. Sincerely thank you, and I have made some adjustments to my poem on your advice.
Serge,Thank you for the help. Glad you enjoyed it. Cheers
Vistaldust, Thanks for reading. You'll recall the hike and have some good imagery from it.
Serge,Thank you for the help. Glad you enjoyed it. Cheers
Vistaldust, Thanks for reading. You'll recall the hike and have some good imagery from it.