The Second Going
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(06-30-2013, 10:59 AM)Vistaldust Wrote:  "The Second Going"

Who tortured the Rabbi,
Milked, then bled the Lamb,
And passed the scepter to high -
Hatted grifters?

Just a turning world,
Half-lifed into
An etherized coma.
Ectopic hearts beat
In a gangrenous body.

There's dope in the cathedral.
There's tears on Herod's Wall.
Hijabs muzzle double-tongued
Angels, Ravi Shankar played
The hippies' ball.

Vultures come to gnarl
On the morbidity of faith,
Filling their gizzards
With apocalyptic horsemen.
The moral compass spins
Like a propellor, until
It flies into orbit.

No more free men in Paris.
No more mistletoe.
When you ask for change
You have to buy the app.
I'm with Billy on a lot of his points, there is some compelling symbolism in the poem but I am left a bit confused, that means you are either much smarter than me or you need to work on clarity. Just my opinion, I found the work compelling.
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The Second Going - by Vistaldust - 06-30-2013, 10:59 AM
RE: The Second Going - by fim - 07-01-2013, 08:55 AM
RE: The Second Going - by Ian James - 07-01-2013, 01:50 PM
RE: The Second Going - by Vistaldust - 07-01-2013, 02:05 PM
RE: The Second Going - by Bunx - 07-03-2013, 12:36 AM
RE: The Second Going - by billy - 07-04-2013, 12:29 PM
RE: The Second Going - by Brownlie - 07-04-2013, 10:22 PM
RE: The Second Going - by Vistaldust - 07-05-2013, 12:52 AM



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