07-04-2013, 07:26 PM
Uh-oh,
I should just keep my mouth shut and things would be better. That might sum up the story of my life.
At the risk of 1) perturbing the monitor (and I suspect but don't know, owner of this site) and 2) violating the "Poems for Serious Critique" critiquing guidelines, I feel compelled to express the (poetically untrained) opinion (if an "opinion" can be "untrained") that there is something in your "offering" that resonates in a place in me that only poetry touches. I would strongly encourage you to listen to the poetry experts that guide you in this segment of this poetry forum because (I strongly believe) your words contain ideas, feelings, ... components of human essence (if you will) that can encourage, focus, maybe even guide fellow travelers on our little journey called life.
Keep writing ... and singing. Your words are Aloe for some of our souls.
I should just keep my mouth shut and things would be better. That might sum up the story of my life.
At the risk of 1) perturbing the monitor (and I suspect but don't know, owner of this site) and 2) violating the "Poems for Serious Critique" critiquing guidelines, I feel compelled to express the (poetically untrained) opinion (if an "opinion" can be "untrained") that there is something in your "offering" that resonates in a place in me that only poetry touches. I would strongly encourage you to listen to the poetry experts that guide you in this segment of this poetry forum because (I strongly believe) your words contain ideas, feelings, ... components of human essence (if you will) that can encourage, focus, maybe even guide fellow travelers on our little journey called life.
Keep writing ... and singing. Your words are Aloe for some of our souls.