07-04-2013, 10:05 AM
(07-04-2013, 09:46 AM)billy Wrote: no crit but the first stanza needs a little workGod it does, I made some in the post changes and cocked it up, quick edit will fix, thanks for the heads up, pools coupon may confuse some but ...thanks Keith
i remember the pools coupon on the mantelpiece.
i can relate to a lot of what the poem has to say.
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out