A place on the mantlepiece

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A place on the mantlepiece

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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07-04-2013, 09:46 AM

no crit but the first stanza needs a little work Smile

i remember the pools coupon on the mantelpiece. Big Grin

i can relate to a lot of what the poem has to say.

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A place on the mantlepiece - by Keith - 07-04-2013, 09:29 AM

RE: A place on the mantlepiece - by billy - 07-04-2013, 09:46 AM

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