Limericks

[Brownlie]

Both of those look metrically transgressed to me

Oh, the limerick form has become
quite a source of confusion for some
but it’s two long on top
then the next two you crop
while the last ends with dum diddy dum

Yes the form was definitely off I've tried to correct the poem on the first one and I wrote two more because I am bored.

A Super superb man of steel -- Man would have to be unstressed
on film as an idol not real
the story the same
He fights in the fray
and evil is beaten in zeal

He’s faster than bullets that bounce
On Muscles that twitch not an ounce
He feels not a hint
Of pain yet the glint
Of justice he shines in a flounce.

When beating on evil what is felt?
When fists are to break and to pelt
In faces so teeth
Are broken beneath
His pummeling blows that are dealt.