07-03-2013, 04:42 PM
Both of those look metrically transgressed to me 
Oh, the limerick form has become
quite a source of confusion for some
but it’s two long on top
then the next two you crop
while the last ends with dum diddy dum
Oh, the limerick form has become
quite a source of confusion for some
but it’s two long on top
then the next two you crop
while the last ends with dum diddy dum
It could be worse