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Volaticus Offline

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07-02-2013, 09:36 AM

Hi Bunx,
Good to see you edited your poem. But I noticed a few things you missed, if you'd like me to point them out to you?
Best,
LB

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on lightbulbs - by Bunx - 06-30-2013, 11:53 PM

RE: on lightbulbs - by Volaticus - 07-01-2013, 10:38 AM

RE: on lightbulbs Cheers - by Ian James - 07-01-2013, 11:09 AM

RE: on lightbulbs - by Bunx - 07-02-2013, 12:03 AM

RE: on lightbulbs - by Volaticus - 07-02-2013, 09:36 AM

RE: on lightbulbs - by Brownlie - 07-02-2013, 10:16 AM

RE: on lightbulbs - by Bunx - 07-02-2013, 11:19 PM

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