07-02-2013, 01:40 AM
(07-01-2013, 02:13 PM)Vistaldust Wrote: Great flow and choice in rhyming. I'm trying to figure out why there is a need to shroud gloom. I take shroud as something used to preserve. I'm trying to find a reason why you would choose a feeling like gloom in this context.Hi,
Thanks a lot for your feedback, I appreciate it.
As milo pointed out, 'shroud' also means to cover up, and that was my intention with using that word. I hope that clears it up.
Best,
LB

