Scrumptious Soup

Scrumptious Soup

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07-01-2013, 02:13 PM

Great flow and choice in rhyming. I'm trying to figure out why there is a need to shroud gloom. I take shroud as something used to preserve. I'm trying to find a reason why you would choose a feeling like gloom in this context.

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Scrumptious Soup - by Volaticus - 07-01-2013, 09:32 AM

RE: Scrumptious Soup - by Vistaldust - 07-01-2013, 02:13 PM

RE: Scrumptious Soup - by milo - 07-01-2013, 02:36 PM

RE: Scrumptious Soup - by Volaticus - 07-02-2013, 01:40 AM

RE: Scrumptious Soup - by Leanne - 07-02-2013, 06:36 AM

RE: Scrumptious Soup - by Volaticus - 07-02-2013, 08:56 AM

RE: Scrumptious Soup - by tectak - 07-02-2013, 02:47 PM

RE: Scrumptious Soup - by tectak - 07-02-2013, 08:07 AM

RE: Scrumptious Soup - by Bunx - 07-02-2013, 09:03 AM

RE: Scrumptious Soup - by Volaticus - 07-02-2013, 09:30 AM

RE: Scrumptious Soup - by Leanne - 07-02-2013, 11:24 AM

RE: Scrumptious Soup - by Volaticus - 07-02-2013, 11:28 AM

RE: Scrumptious Soup - by Vistaldust - 07-02-2013, 01:11 PM

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