on lightbulbs

[newsclippings]

i climbed this spiral staircase,
i climbed it all night.
when i got to the to top
i was, so fried.

I thought I was the only one who didn't capitalize i's. I sever my ties with punctuation when my message is apathetic. I don't know if that's what you're going for here.

bulbs of light,
ideas so bright with connotation, you don't need "with connotation"
so friendly with human relation.

machines are machines that grow
big and strong. machines grow
fingers and eyes with pure
disguise. but lightbulbs, peculiar punctuation, once again. If you're going to ditch the rules of the English language, make your use of punctuation a little more interesting. Also what is a pure disguise?
hmmm i do not know.

I don't like the last line. You have a way with repeating words that could either infuriate or placate people.

Edison the man behind the tube, Screw Edison. Tesla was the true genius. I hate that Edison gets any recognition at all. Dumbass almost lost his eyesight due to his fiddling with x-ray machines. He was a dirty businessman, and the only reason we don't have free electricity is because of him.
a screaming loop, never hid his true intent.
light is light for all and never forget. the
climax is the light burning out. I don't know about this last line.