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06-30-2013, 11:35 PM
i would say if your close to a lightbulb, going up that hot ladder. you might want to think about that light bulbs existence. and far as your poem goes. i would make sure to use full stops indicated by commas, and periods. i did enjoy this poem even though it is clearly about trying to reach a heavenly existence, i think
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
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my light - by konstantin27 - 06-30-2013, 01:41 AM
RE: my light - by rowens - 06-30-2013, 01:49 AM
RE: my light - by billy - 06-30-2013, 10:51 AM
RE: my light - by Vistaldust - 06-30-2013, 10:53 AM
RE: my light - by konstantin27 - 06-30-2013, 01:20 PM
RE: my light - by billy - 06-30-2013, 01:42 PM
RE: my light - by konstantin27 - 06-30-2013, 02:57 PM
RE: my light - by milo - 06-30-2013, 03:13 PM
RE: my light - by Bunx - 06-30-2013, 11:35 PM
RE: my light - by Vistaldust - 07-01-2013, 05:22 AM
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