06-30-2013, 07:01 PM
billy: to quote you
"this is my 2nd time giving feedback on this, i deleted my last one by accident "
You're not gonna blame that on me I hope. ;-)
Thank you for reading me.
I did not get this:
"
to carve out a restroom for your mournings. to image continues"
what do you mean?
Oh wait lt me put it poshier:
Would ypoem just fell out of my heart iou be so kind and care to instruct me
in what way I could best imporove my ladt line?
Or to put a tad more colloquial:
what the fuck do you mean. ;-))
This my poem just fell out of my heart a sea of blood
into your voice (obviously)
cheers
and you know what: Tomtec makes it worse mentioning dentists on a sunday!
Does this man have no heart at all?
Whsatevr: should anything happen to me t night (bc I ll be fishing for gals)
I can blame it now on Tom: perfect scapegoat.
And on a serious note: Ann Sexton's death poem (death is her lover)I will right now try to find onlne.
Otherwise I ll scan it bc I have the book.
I
bingo:
Here it is billy:
http://www.depressiontribe.com/groups/vi...-Door-Open
"this is my 2nd time giving feedback on this, i deleted my last one by accident "
You're not gonna blame that on me I hope. ;-)
Thank you for reading me.
I did not get this:
"
to carve out a restroom for your mournings. to image continues"
what do you mean?
Oh wait lt me put it poshier:
Would ypoem just fell out of my heart iou be so kind and care to instruct me
in what way I could best imporove my ladt line?
Or to put a tad more colloquial:
what the fuck do you mean. ;-))
This my poem just fell out of my heart a sea of blood
into your voice (obviously)
cheers
and you know what: Tomtec makes it worse mentioning dentists on a sunday!
Does this man have no heart at all?
Whsatevr: should anything happen to me t night (bc I ll be fishing for gals)
I can blame it now on Tom: perfect scapegoat.
And on a serious note: Ann Sexton's death poem (death is her lover)I will right now try to find onlne.
Otherwise I ll scan it bc I have the book.
I
bingo:
Here it is billy:
http://www.depressiontribe.com/groups/vi...-Door-Open
