The Descent

[wystan1000]

I am truly a novice at this whole poetry thing, but to any one who has ever been touched by Alzheimer's, it is very apparent what this poem is about. By the fifth line I was sure. I found your poem touching and sad and true. thankyou. x

what about the flow? Would you say that it had good flow?

Yeah, I think you are right. I might have been a bit harsh in the first instance. Anyway, the point is this is a really solid start at writing poetry showing a clear understanding of what's needed and involved. On that we agree.