Road-Kill

[tectak]

Hmm... I disagree with you about the meter but you make good points on the syntax. Perhaps you have to capture a more natural speech when using blank verse but ending a line with quickly would be a metrical error. Good point on the brake pads. Also you make some other good points. Thanks for commenting. But it is spelled Navajo... What a Fucking mess.

Zounds! What a time to start spelling correctly!
Very best,
tectak

This poem was a serious bummer man... but I'm glad you read the whole thing and were honest.

Yep...a car crash. It happens to us all....but usually we don't post the failures. I only stick up one in twenty and still write shit with regularity.
billy has made an art form of it. Clever bastard. All we moron's love him
Best,
tectak