Road-Kill

[Brownlie]

This is unworthy of you. It says very little but takes the scenic route. Driving fast kills things. End.
You are expecting far too much of your ability...your muse left the building a long way back. Forget about meter. You have other things to attend to.
Best,
tectak

Hmm... I disagree with you about the meter but you make good points on the syntax. Perhaps you have to capture a more natural speech when using blank verse but ending a line with quickly would be a metrical error. Good point on the brake pads. Also you make some other good points. Thanks for commenting. But it is spelled Navajo... What a Fucking mess.

Zounds! What a time to start spelling correctly!
Very best,
tectak

This poem was a serious bummer man... but I'm glad you read the whole thing and were honest.