Alone

[Zerric]

Standing in the cattle crowd of fashion painted clones.
Insipid words that string along into an endless drone.
All around me act as one, that's when I feel alone.

Framing into phrasing all the feelings that I own;
Finding that the more I try the more I turn to stone.
Fighting to express myself, that's when I feel alone.

My mind invokes the images of lives I may have known.
Knowing that I clipped my wings and wishing that I'd flown.
Wondering who I could be, that's when I feel alone.

Watching myself reaching out for sins I don't condone.
Wondering how I proceed, wanting to atone.
A stranger in the mirror says, "That's when I feel alone."

Shoulder brushing shoulder; clichés I trade intone.
Realizing that they're hiding secrets of their own.
Bonded in our solitude, united and alone.

Overall its good...

You used Wondering twice...kinda throws you off while your reading...you should change one of them.
There's a really good word that means about the same thing as wondering and is only one letter different...i'll let you figure that one out