My Last Walk by Keith
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(06-22-2013, 08:10 AM)Leanne Wrote:  As I stepped off the building,
the world turned through 90 degrees
and I strolled past neighbours windows,
looking down inside their rooms
warm, bright, family life behind glass.

Vibrant with activity, sit down meals,
office workers greeted with kisses,
children fighting over the tv remote,
dog stretched out in front of the fire,
siblings giggling with bath time bubbles,
passionate couples arguing over nothing,
bodies showering away the days grime,
dad wrestling with three little monsters,
a lady near the ground floor even waved.

As I stepped onto the pavement
I said “my world isn’t too bad”
But I was walking faster than I thought.

I left the note under a rock,
so it didn’t blow away.


*The original thread and comments can be found here
Worthy TOMH.
This one is up there. Good egg.
Best,
tectak
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Messages In This Thread
My Last Walk by Keith - by Leanne - 06-22-2013, 08:10 AM
RE: My Last Walk by TimeOnMyHands - by billy - 06-22-2013, 09:19 AM
RE: My Last Walk by TimeOnMyHands - by Magpie - 06-23-2013, 12:57 AM
RE: My Last Walk by TimeOnMyHands - by milo - 06-23-2013, 01:19 AM
RE: My Last Walk by TimeOnMyHands - by Keith - 06-24-2013, 07:01 AM
RE: My Last Walk by TimeOnMyHands - by Leanne - 06-24-2013, 02:21 PM
RE: My Last Walk by TimeOnMyHands - by cidermaid - 06-25-2013, 04:35 PM
RE: My Last Walk by TimeOnMyHands - by Keith - 06-27-2013, 05:09 AM
RE: My Last Walk by TimeOnMyHands - by tectak - 06-27-2013, 04:07 PM



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