using other forms besides iambic pentameter.

[milo]

... ever rusting in the chains of mine own irony.


A shy, deferential torpedo,
Fell in love with a pregnant mosquito.
For the sake of their rhyme, they went back in time,*
And emerged as a blood-filled burrito.


*In homage to my feline friends, I concatenate the
two dimeter lines of limericks to make a line with four feet.

While reading your rhyming oblation
I came to the realization
the rhythm was fine, though
your missing a line. Oh!
it's because of the concatenation.

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i think ray was on about me
being the dark force you see
with a well sharpened axe
i'll chop to the max
if the topic's not kept to a tee

brownlie's like a blister or boil
he speaks; we stand back or recoil
with wiki he's tricki
and can be quite picky
though he does make an excellent foil

yah, billy's a regular nazi
if you look for my post but cannot see
the things that I wrote
well, I'd like to denote
if you think, he'll post edit your thoughts, see.