Sandstorm
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(06-14-2013, 10:05 AM)c.gutzwiller Wrote:  Memories, philosophies
Tosseled on a mental breeze
Teaching me to know anew
Thoughts are neither false nor true
They're living, breathing, taunting things
that was my favorite part. i loved this. excellent flow, consistent strong imagery. great read. keep writing.
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Sandstorm - by c.gutzwiller - 06-14-2013, 10:05 AM
RE: Sandstorm - by Ela - 06-21-2013, 02:32 AM
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