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Last words
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03-09-2010, 01:27 PM
(03-09-2010, 10:49 AM)Loveblind Wrote: Thanks for the feed back guys. It was a poem based on a friendship that has ended and I don't know the reason for the ending. I was inspired by Bukowski to try enjambment style poetry( that I am now learning in my creative writing class)good to see you trying new forms. just remember with enjambment that very few words work in a line on their own. |
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Last words - by Loveblind - 03-09-2010, 06:04 AM
RE: Last words - by addy - 03-09-2010, 07:51 AM
RE: Last words - by billy - 03-09-2010, 08:49 AM
RE: Last words - by Loveblind - 03-09-2010, 10:49 AM
RE: Last words - by billy - 03-09-2010, 01:27 PM
RE: Last words - by addy - 03-10-2010, 11:24 AM
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